Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Stuck as friend forever..



Rohan could have smiled at that moment but the dryness of his cracked lips didn’t stretch his blistered cheeks to a grin. He was hoping things will change. The done would become undone. He looked at the coffee mug and read -’Friends Forever.’ He looked at the mug again and remembered the coffee chats on the same table and how she held a mug tightly to warm her cold hands. She was the closest he had ever been to zenith of happiness. He knew no worries and no hundreds and thousands of things that bothered him otherwise. With her he felt free, liberated and relaxed. He remembered her walking through the glass door every morning passing a smile that would melt his heart and made him believe in existence of angels. He thought about the numerous occasion when she would come to him and ask him to help her out with her silly problems. He remembered how she made an innocent face and hit her forehead slightly with her hand and said -’Oho!’

Ritika was his reason of existence, so much so he breathed her. Ritika was his primal reason of any thing in his life. They giggled and giggled without realizing the reason of the giggles. Ritika had gone on a fifteen days break from work when she gave him the mug on her last day before her break began. She was going with her family to relax. Rohan knew he would miss her and would feel incomplete but he knew he would confess his love for her when she will come back.

Fifteen days passed with great difficulties and Ritika came beaming brighter as ever. Rohan could have cried with hapiness looking at her face but couldn’t as he wanted to be strong. Rohan picked his mug and they headed to the cafeteria. Rohan was about to tell Ritika about his feelings when Ritika announced -'I am in love.' Rohan felt deaf for milliseconds. He smiled to hide his disbelief and kept looking at the same face which made him happiest and saddest at the very random moment. She kept talking and talking and he kept bringing himself back from the wild imagination he had sported in those fifteen days. He cursed at his unremitting status quo of friend!

Ritika logged off from her system early that evening and asked Rohan to tell others that she had to leave early if in case anybody asked. She picked up her stuff- her big bag with things that even she didn’t knew was there inside and her umbrella and headed for the door. She came back in a frenzy and hugged Rohan and said bye and rushed through the door.

Rohan could have smiled at that moment but …………..


I wrote this story today morning and even I cant believ I just completed it in half a day :-o..seems like I am really improving :D....or maybe on second thoughts I am just too veili these days for the story to come out so smoothly :P...Watever do tell me how is it ?? :)

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow a gud 1 agn.... :)

m glad u wrote a stry on my request :D

keep on rytin coz i luv readin shrt stories .....

dis 1 wz shrt..bt sweet... :)

nxt kab aaegi :P

Kuki said...

dis stry ws pendin since a lng time..it ws in my head bt ws jst not writin it dwn...jab u askd me 2 write smethin i dint av nethin on mind so jst thot of finally putin it in2 words :)

nxt pata nahi re u kno me :P

Unknown said...

bas usko last mein ladki nahi mili toh am very happy :D

Kuki said...

gawwwd gaurav u r so impossible n sch a sch a...i duno wat :P

Andy said...

lklfone of the best...no...the best..i kno u wud'v likd kashish more, bt dis is oh-so different..simple,plain,short..n yet!!!
da most ship-rocking ending evr read..he could've smiled but...
the most excellent write on this blog o urs..kudos :)

Kuki said...

@ andy
dnt teme u liked it so mch..srsly kya??? ;-o..no u av got 2 b kidin...i mean sme ppl evn comentd tht dey found d story kind of incomplete :-/

neways for me u kno it kashish is d best :D...bt if u did lke it ..thnk yaaaa :)